Want High Stakes? Amp up the Stress!

In the real world, we avoid stress whenever possible but in writing, the opposite is true. Why? Because in the land of the Three Act Structure (TAS), STRESS = CONFLICT.

In the TAS, our main character has a need or desire which outside forces try to prevent, challenging him to overcome adversity to achieve his goal. Sounds like a nice, simple formula, doesn't it? However, without the critical element of STRESS, the storyline falls flat.

Little Johnny wants a cupcake. His mother says no. He waits until she turns her back and then takes one anyway.

Can you see it? No Stress = BORING. Johnny wants something, but he isn't stressed about it. The reader could care less whether he achieves his goal or not, because the stakes are nonexistent.

But let's look again, this time applying factors to cause stress:

Little Johnny has diabetes, and hypoglycemia is setting in. He doesn't want that cupcake, he freaking needs that cupcake. He's shaky, sweating, and his limbs aren't cooperating like they should, and he knows that if he doesn't get sugar STAT, it'll be lights out.

As readers, this situation has our blood boiling. Mom's obviously sadistic, not handing the sweet over. If it was up to us, we'd call Social Services and cheer as she's charged with neglect and failing to provide the necessities of life. Sadly, it isn't up to us, so all we can do is watch, helpless, and pray Johnny is strong enough to figure out what to do.

The application of stress has achieved something incredible: the reader now cares about Johnny. They are invested in his situation and riveted on the outcome. 

With the stress level maxed, the stage is set for action. The stakes are high. What will Johnny do to survive? How will he overcome his weakness and defeat this older, stronger mother-villain? How will he push aside the emotional connection of being her son to save his own life?

It doesn't matter what the situation is, STRESS is what pushes your main character to ACT. It can force them to go against their own nature or beliefs, to meet challenges, overcome obstacles and face danger. Stress creates tension, which leads to conflict, so don't be afraid to amp up the stress. The higher the stress, the more elevated the stakes are, laying the groundwork for a compelling story that will captivate your reader and make them feel invested in the outcome.

33 comments:

Holly Ruggiero said...

It's kind of funny how we stress for no stress in our real lives but in the writing world we seeks it out.

Lisa Gail Green said...

LOL first off, I LOVE the pic. Also, great post. :D I'm surprised my characters don't suffer from high blood pressure simply from the amount of stress I put them through. But it's oh so much fun!

Deb said...

Oh. Wow. Loved this post! Short, sweet and oh to the point!

Thank you...and ah, yeah...this is the second post I've read that involved cupcakes.

Now I have to have one, who knew blog reading could be so fattening?! Talk about stress, man....

C. N. Nevets said...

Great post, but I think even just the title plus the picture of Fry cemented the point in my mind. Excellent. :)

Kelly said...

Great example! Thankfully my characters are more stressed than I am!

Pk Hrezo said...

*click* and the lightbulb in my head comes on.

Thanks! :)

Laurel Garver said...

Great illustration, especially how upping the stakes makes readers invest more.

Heather said...

So true, stress adds wonderful things to a novel. I love taking all my stress and dumping it into my characters. It makes the story much more interesting and helps me out in the process!

Patti Struble said...

I love this article. I am playing the 1000 question game this week & this article sets the pace for what I am looking for. Thanks so much.
Patti

AubrieAnne said...

I never thought of it that way. The fact that what our characters face is stress just like we face everyday. Thanks for the article. It was a great read today.

The Golden Eagle said...

Stress really does make a story a lot better; higher stakes and more tension are important for keeping the reader's attention.

C.R. Evers said...

awesome post. Well put!

Laura Pauling said...

So true! I think we forget sometimes to ramp up the stakes in the little moments!

Nicole MacDonald said...

Yup, conflict and stress really adds to the book. Took me a while to realise it but my work is hundreds of times better now :) can't be nice all the time!

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JEFritz said...

I never thought about the importance of stress in writing! Thanks for the tip. Ideas are now flooding my head.

Becca Puglisi said...

Such a great reminder. I'm too easy on my characters.

Patti said...

Great post on how to up the ante of your characters and plot.

Tere Kirkland said...

LOL, awesome pic! So true about conflict. I have to remind myself this sometimes, and that it's for the best in the long run.

Your characters will thank you!

Melissa Gill said...

Loved your example or how to push the stress up. I wonder if people love to read about stressed out folks as a way of transferring their own stress.

Jordan McCollum said...

Oh, man. This is a basic lesson, and one it never hurts to relearn. I've done whole series on stress (tension and conflict), but reading this post gave me a brainwave: a great way to help make my heroine more sympathetic!

Mary Witzl said...

This is so true. Two years ago, I read a book for adults that had so little stress in it and people who were all so nice to each other, I could barely get through it. I'm not asking for cookie cutter villains or endless bad luck, but a little stress there would have made the story so much better.

Julie Musil said...

It took me a little while before I was comfortable with stressing out my characters. Now I keep a list of potential rocks I can throw. Great stuff!

aquafortis said...

Agreed w/C.N. - the picture of Fry did it for me, too! :)

Great example. I was just thinking about this topic--specifically, how much I dislike it when an author uses animals-in-danger to increase the stakes. It gets so I hate to even SEE a pet appear in a stressful story, lest something horrible happen. Plus it makes me feel like the author is manipulating my emotions. There are a lot of other ways to increase tension in a story!!

Nathalie said...

How true! I love the example you used with little Johnny. How two similar paragraphs can impact a person so differently!

I know myself, I get so caught up with 'conflict' I forget about the stress invloved. Thanks for the great post.

Anne R. Allen said...

Excellent post. I think some writers get so attached to their characters they don't want to be mean to them. But stress sure is what makes a story.

Stina Lindenblatt said...

Very helpful as always. :D

Btw, that picture looks like me in the morning when I get the kids ready for school.

Beth said...

Great suggestions. When I fall in love with my characters, it's hard to subject them to stress. But it's the only thing that makes a story work.

Jayne said...

Aw poor stressed characters! But yes, we want some sort of dramatic tension, even if it is the quiet internal kind where the characters' go on a journey of self-discovery.

Carol Riggs said...

Great point. I constantly have to asses my ms as to how much stress or conflict certain parts have. A little break is good sometimes too, in between the spikes and peaks of undue stress. It lets the reader rest and makes the peaks seem higher.

Shannon O'Donnell said...

This is brilliant, Angela. I've been working to amp up the stress in my MS, so this is perfect timing for me. :-)

Jaleh D said...

That's sort of funny. Stress makes for better writing even if we'd rather have less of it in our lives. Stress about the current weather conditions is what led to my post about snow, so that would be an example of using stress in a creative way, even if not the one you meant. ;p

Lydia K said...

Stress in life, not good.
Stress in story, VERY good!

dita said...

Wow , i didn't think that stres has such an important role .

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