Look at the setting and the character's state of mind, and then think about what you want the reader to see. Is there a descriptive symbol or two that works naturally within the scene to help foreshadow an event or theme, or create insight into the character's emotional plight?
In Nature:
The open sea
A horseThe wind
A bird in flight
An open field
Wide open spaces
Insects flitting from one flower to the nextWide open spaces
Squirrels jumping from tree to tree
An open prison cell
An open lock
An open door
Empty shackles or handcuffs
A broken chain
A key
An animal being released into the wild
A flag
A country's Independence Day/birthday
Your first car
Graduation DayThe open road
Motorcycles
A person walking away
Human rights
DancingNakedness
Knowledge
Vacations
These are just a few examples of things one might associate with freedom. Some are more powerful than others. Empty shackles are a strong symbol, and likely will not require reinforcement. However, a bird in flight could represent numerous things and may not foreshadow freedom on its own. Let the story's tone decide if one strong symbol or several smaller ones work the best.
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I've run out of clever things to say about these posts, but only because their level of awesome is that difficult to put into words!
This could also help title duds like me Title a WIP
thanks.
I love this one! What an excellent symbol to use in one's work. Thank you! I'm inspired now!
This is a neat idea. When I'm writing, I don't often think of symbolism, but this puts it into perspective. Sybolism doesn't have to be overly complicated.
*sigh* Love this! :-)
This is great! Thanks for sharing!
Mirrors always work for me. A bit overused but a good fall back as objects are concern.
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